Incurus
21-01-2008, 11:19 PM
((OOC> Heres my first draught of the beginning of my character introduction for Warhammer, i always need to write a story or at least run one through my head to get the idea for my characters even if im not on a RP server.. im just like that :)
Its very VERY rough and needs a lot of punishing and only 1.5 of the 4 tests each will go through is there, intending to have the maruder do his tests for each god and the inquisitor to suffer or deal with something similar yet different, constructive (note the previous word!) critiscism would be apprecated! ))
The air filled with a acrid stench as the sharp crack broke through the chanting bringing a profound silence in its wake, the Priest stood behind the altar, blood dripping from a hole in his forehead and down like blood red tears to drip in penitence from his cheeks before he fell backwards to collapse on the holy ground.
Its very VERY rough and needs a lot of punishing and only 1.5 of the 4 tests each will go through is there, intending to have the maruder do his tests for each god and the inquisitor to suffer or deal with something similar yet different, constructive (note the previous word!) critiscism would be apprecated! ))
The air filled with a acrid stench as the sharp crack broke through the chanting bringing a profound silence in its wake, the Priest stood behind the altar, blood dripping from a hole in his forehead and down like blood red tears to drip in penitence from his cheeks before he fell backwards to collapse on the holy ground.